Good potential. Is the buildingholding pendulum round? Can you emphasize that, if that is the case. This should be wider: 16" high by 24" wide. Can be wider. When you do that you will give this image elbow room for a deeper background, and room for more imagination. Can you make the pendulum seem to be moving? Is that water around the buildings? What has happened in intervening years?
Good potential. Is the buildingholding pendulum round? Can you emphasize that, if that is the case. This should be wider: 16" high by 24" wide. Can be wider. When you do that you will give this image elbow room for a deeper background, and room for more imagination. Can you make the pendulum seem to be moving? Is that water around the buildings? What has happened in intervening years?
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