tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2851887971843337226.post6166842524949568628..comments2012-05-09T09:16:33.098-07:00Comments on ARTS 325 Digital Painting 2012: Agopolis WIPMary Ciani Saslowhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14253549160774865517noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2851887971843337226.post-10299697400158690982012-03-17T19:40:51.110-07:002012-03-17T19:40:51.110-07:00Possibilities....
Wall in front semes to stop our...Possibilities.... <br />Wall in front semes to stop our ability to enter space and go deep between buildings.<br />Threes are not strong: have possibilites, but the grassy texture does not appear to be integrated into image. <br />Leafy? texture on side of building looks unrelated to remaining style.<br />All in all, rather than looking like a coherent or stylized image, it just looks messy :-(<br />What can I say... the black and white image you posted along the way was stronger, moodier. Can any of that find its way here? Probably not? I know that was of another view down the side of the building, but I dunno - this does not seem to represent your abilities?Mary Ciani Saslowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14253549160774865517noreply@blogger.com